Monday, November 9, 2009

Proposal Draft 1 P.W.

After writing my first draft for my proposal i feel strong about the way i wrote it. I felt it had a purpose and that it could be used as a real proposal, which is what i was aiming for.

Things i need to work on are my conclusion and some more detail in the personal story. I definitely think the conclusion is short and missing something. I hope my partner can help me with that.

-Do you think my proposal is explained well?

-Anything else need to be changed, as far as making this a real proposal?

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